My first site - Business Consultants - please say what you think so far!!

Question posted on 05-02-2009 12:24 PM by Gary. 2 replies.

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  • 05-02-2009 12:24 PM
    • Gary
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    My first site - Business Consultants - please say what you think so far!!

    My site isnt finished but i want tips and opinions on what could be better there is a couple of spelling mistakes ect and it needs tweaking but any ideas i would love to hear please!!!!!!!!!!

     

    www.adminangels.eu

    Gary Hilton

    Sales Manager

    Admin Angels

    www.adminangels.eu

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  • 05-04-2009 10:15 AM
    FTE
    Re: My first site - Business Consultants - please say what you think so far!!

    I think you’ve got a pretty nice site under way, although there are several things you should consider.

     

     In your post you mentioned spelling errors and yes, you’ve got those, but you’ve also got awkwardly constructed sentences, glaring punctuation errors, etc. You really should find or hire a good copy editor – in your business you don’t want to come across looking unprofessional. (Just one example: On your Home page, note your logo shows your company name adminangels … but in the copy below in big type you add an unnecessary apostrophe and make it two words. It’s your company name; you should be consistent on how you present it.)

     

    The other thing about your Home page is that you should give an idea of the areas/countries you serve, languages offered, etc. You should also add a call to action – encourage people to call or email right away. I'd feature both of those things prominently.

     

    As for the big type and all the color, I don’t mind it but will be curious how others react. I do think you need to pick a style and use it consistently throughout your site. You wander a bit from one look to another in terms of design and text style.

     

    A few other things I noticed:

     

    ·         The navigation is a bit too light and hard to read.

    ·         On your Advertise Your Business page the spacing if off on your text, making it difficult to read.

    ·         On your FAQs page (note, no apostrophe required in FAQs), the type is much too light to read easily, and again the spacing seems off.

     

    Overall, though, it looks like you’re off to a great start. Good luck!

     

    Liz

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  • 06-11-2009 1:25 PM
    • jchamp95
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    Re: My first site - Business Consultants - please say what you think so far!!

    Text shouldnt be 2 diff. colors and the font is too big. Also your header image is too big.Other than that. Its great!

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