Hello,
I agree with the wideness and the typos but a few other things I saw...
NB. (If I am unable to answer the phone please leave a message with your name and number!)
I also screen my calls but this statement would make other angry. I would either find another phone you can use for business or perhaps a cell phone, as I did. Leave the statement out completely.
In your "About Us" page. Just a note on the "slightly older group"..be real careful not to offend anyone here. Either the people that gave the testimonial OR your viewing audience.
I would like to see a caption on the Contact Us page stating that you are going to PROTECT my information and not sell it to someone else.
Booking page..why the two pages??
News page...if you have nothing to say here..it's better not to say anything. Leave this out until you have content to share.
I would like to see a FAQ page too.
I think you are on the right track here and given your "young" age I would say
Congrats..just spruce it up a bit. And use SPELLCHECK**
Have fun!
Patti